The video is a good and interesting idea to be used as a lead-in. If the major events /Newt's heroic actions were given in the video, it would be perfect!!! Well, there are another two typos spotted if you don't mind. At 1:12, instead of which, who is more appropriate. Likewise, at 2:12, I think you may mean " celebrity". Inverted commas are good to use here, too.
There is a typo. I think you wanted to say "Chris FELL into a coma...at around 0.45
ReplyDeleteThe video is a good and interesting idea to be used as a lead-in. If the major events /Newt's heroic actions were given in the video, it would be perfect!!! Well, there are another two typos spotted if you don't mind. At 1:12, instead of which, who is more appropriate. Likewise, at 2:12, I think you may mean " celebrity". Inverted commas are good to use here, too.
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